Editing Samples

Scientific Reports

These are three samples of editing work done on numerous technical/scientific papers for the California Integrated Waste Management Board (CIWMB), now CalRecycle. The samples show the original and edited versions of the same sections of each report. All work was done using Microsoft Word. The PDF samples were created solely for this website. (Click image to open PDF)

Modesto Report - original
Original

 

Degradable Plastic Report - original
Original

 

Anaerobic Digestion Report - original
Original

Modesto Report - edited
Edited

 

Degradable Plastic Report - edited
Edited

 

Anaerobic Digestion Report - edited
Edited

Emissions Testing of Volatile Organic Compounds from Greenwaste Composting at the Modesto Compost Facility in the San Joaquin Valley (sample)

 

 


Performance Evaluation of Environmentally Degradable Plastic Packaging and Disposable Food Service Ware Final Report (sample)

 


 

Current Technologies Used for the Anaerobic Digestion of Municipal Solid Waste
(sample)

 

Science Labs

These are two samples (single pages) of editing work done on numerous High School, Advanced Placement, and Middle School science labs for PASCO Scientific. Work included copy editing, styling, layout, and content. The samples show the original with corrections using the track changes function in Microsoft Word.

All work was done using Microsoft Word. The PDF samples were created solely for this website. (Click image to open PDF)

PASCO AP Biology Lab 5 thumbnail      PASCO HSE Earths Magnetic Field thumbnail
            AP Biology                                                             High School Earth Science